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丽丽的“恐怖小说” : THE MASK

        There was once a little girl named rosy, she loved to dress up and show her mother. On one perticular day, rosy was going to school with her friend izabella and when the girls went into the classroom every one was there, like any tipical day. At snack, she spotted a narrow mask covered in yellow glitter, and sprayed perfectly with black, and a long tube like nose piont, rosy told izabella and said "Look at that shiny mask over there!" " Uh, rosy there is no mask there, sorry to say" said izabella. "Uh, ya huh! Look!" Rosy grabbed the mask from the dark shade and gave it to izabella to hold. "Wow, gee sorry, i thought there was no mask in the dark shade!""Its okay!" rosy cheerfully said as she felt proud of knowing it was there. "Hey, rosy...." "Ya?" said rosy, "How did u see the mask without light...?" Rosy thought aboutthat for a minute. " i dunno.... Maybe i might have super powers! rosy joked. "well... what if its something... ELSE?" Izabella shivered. Ah, will get over it, tomorrow will be a normal morning! cheerfully said izabella. "Uh, ya... normal day huh..." The young girls woke up and went to school to find no one was there, "Thats strange, i thought you said it would be a normal day...!" said rosy getting gassy. "Well, you know me.. ALWAYS LIEING! eh ha ha ha... he....?" "are you okay izabella...?" said rosy. "YUP, I FINE, I MEAN GOOD, I MEAN.. MAYBE, OR NOT, OR YES... or... maybe fi-" "Okay okay i get it!" said rosy rapeating it over and over again. They walked into the classroom to find blood splatered on the walls and floors. the girls screamed. "WHAT IN THE HELL OF HELLS HAPPENED TO OUR CLASSROOM!?!?!?!?" they shouted. The mask was suddenly hung on the walls with blood splatterd with  its rusted black paint, and only few parts of the yellow glitter on it. The mask also had a stick to hold like a haloween costume. "wu- wu- what happened to... the mask...?" said rosy. " i... dont know..." said izabella. they turned around to find the mask was not on the walls anymore, rosy looked down and saw the mask in her hands, the top of the mask had a sharp SHARp SHARP blade on it and cut into a featherlike shape, and each point of the blaid was sharp as a devils horn dipped in lava, the blaid and the handle stick was not there at the first place eather. Rosy suddenly felt the noise in her head saying "KILL HER......""NO I AM NOT GONNA KILL HER!" rosy shouted in the dead like classroom. "Ar- are you okay rosy...?" Rosy narrowed her eyes at izabelle and said, "I am PERFECTLY FINE."She made a laugh that almost no one could hear. hahahaha HA, with a sudden stroke, she hit izabella and said," I thought it would be a normal day...!" "i- i- im- im sorry..." "Its to LATE to be SORRY" and with one last hit, izabella was dead. Rosy head to the classroom and saw the princibal talking on the phone and heard him saying" itwas really there, i saw it kill everybody!" "Sir, it is against the law to call 911 for a bad reason" said the police moderator. Rosy walked slowly without making a sound to the princibal's office and said every so slowly "Found you...." and Cut the princibals head off. In five minutes the police arrived and saw rosy sharpening the feather like blade and looked up. "PUT YOUR HANDS UP!" Yelled the police. "Not in a million years" grinned rosy, she dissapeard and the polices turned around and with a second, they died,With the quick cut of the blade.    

                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                            
                                                                                                                         By: Lily Chen.
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1楼  发表于: 2014-09-28  
她又写了一个:“AWOKE"
    A pree-teen girl named Sky was walking down a stone path road with her family, she was wearing a flower top that was Blue with a little skirt at the bottom, and a blue frilly skirt that matched her other top, she was walking when she saw some scribbles carved into the stone paved road, she had thought it was a little kid scribbling on the path, so it was a normal thought. The family was walking down a steep slope when she found a rock with more scribbles on it and a letter "A" She said it was just in her head and it would be gone soon. Sky had long nails and she could pick through any lock in doors. The family was walking when sky saw more scribbles with more Signs Like: "-", "W" And "O" Sky was Getting scared and told her mother, she said that it maybe was supposed to be a puzzle and maybe a summer camp visited here for the puzzle. Sky was getting suspicious and Walked alittle faster then usual. She sat on a bench and saw even more scribbles with a.... word on it. It looked like a name Like "Ken" Sky put together all the words and she found out it said: A-Woken. Sky felt this pain in her body and she fell to the pathway, and ciclists running over her by accident because it was a slope. Sky got up and she found blood all over her mouth and bike stamps all over her. "Ahh! what happened to me?!?!?!" "Honey, Its okay your gonna be fine!" "I feel Terrible!" Said sky while Choking up lots of blood. She heard a noise in her head say.... "Wake Up! You know you wanna do the... Killing i guess...?" Because of Skys long nails they had been sharper as sharp as a japanese blade dipped in lava. Sky rushed to the house, grabbed her school bag, and ran out. She had killed and sufficated many people and kids, and was never seen again by parents, however, the parents had a new baby, and the minute they got the baby from the hospital and went to bed, the baby was stabbed at her neck by... Sky. The park was closed and forever abandon.
                                                                          
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手工作业:北冰洋的生态

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3楼  发表于: 2015-03-24  
开文的作文
难得看到开文写了一篇千字以上的文章,内容是关于防疫的,一些医学名词我也不太清楚,全文照搬,贴在这儿做个存档:


Vaccines ISP essay
Since the 18th century vaccines have been saving lives. Saving lives that would have ended horribly to the likes of whooping cough, measles, tuberculosis, even putting an end to smallpox’s reign of terror. For 300 years vaccines have made life better for mankind. but recently vaccination rates have gone down, that is to say, people aren’t vaccinating themselves or their children as often as we used to. I intend to weigh the pros and cons to receiving vaccinations against each other in order to evaluate whether or not the vaccine decliners are justified in their actions as well as looking at “pseudo cons” or personal reasons someone may not WANT to vaccinate.



First off, just to get this out of the way, the notion that vaccines cause autism originates from a study done on the 28th of February 1998 by Andrew Wakefield titled “Ileal-lymphoid-nodular hyperplasia, non-specific colitis, and pervasive developmental disorder in children”, which has been retracted in 2004 for scientific misconduct (Eggertson, Laura. “Lancet retracts 12-year-old article linking autism to MMR vaccines”. CMAJ. February 8, 2010. Web.  March 18 2015) as well as books written by physician William sears, otherwise known simply as “Dr.Sears” whose integrity is questionable at best (Snyder, John. “Cashing in on fear:The Danger of Dr.Sears”. Science Based Medicine. July 30th 2009. Web.  March 18 2015) Considering that the Wakefield paper being retracted and Dr.Sears’ questionable integrity demonstrated by this quote :

“[Measles is]Usually not [Dangerous]. Most cases, especially in children, pass within a week or so without any trouble. However, approximately 1 in 1000 cases is fatal…Now that measles is rare, many years go by without any fatalities.The possible complications of measles, mumps, or rubella are very similar to the side effect of the vaccines themselves.” - William Sears


the vaccines cause autism argument is almost certainly false. Though even if it was indeed true autism is a much better condition to live with than measles or whooping cough.



    A more valid concern regarding vaccines is compromised immune systems, while vaccines can support a weakened immune system in some cases, vaccines that use live viruses such as the MMR vaccine can pose a serious risk to an immunocompromised person’s health (riversideonline.com.”Vaccines When Your Immune System is Compromised”. N.D.Web. March 18 2015) this leaves immunocompromised individuals vulnerable to diseases such as measles mumps and rubella. There are other ways for these people to avoid infection, such as maintaining proper hygiene, or ensuring that people close to them are vaccinated, maintaining herd immunity which I will be covering later.

    On a similar note to the “autism” argument many anti-vaccine groups claim that vaccines weaken the immune system by being injected directly to the bloodstream rather than entering the way an infection would normally as well as containing harmful chemicals (“Your Immune System: How it works And How Vaccines Damage it”. Vaccine Risk Awareness. N.D. Web.  March 18 2015). Though a vaccine does enter the body differently than a the disease would naturally, there is no reason to that such a method would weaken the immune system, considering that memory cells are only created after a disease has bypassed the immune system’s first line of defense (skin, macrophages, ext.). as for the harmful chemicals, most point toward thermasol (ethylmercury) whose effects are often confused with methylmercury which is harmful in certain dosages though ethylmercury has no proven effects on the human body, despite this ethylmercury is no longer used in vaccines and shouldn’t be a concern.




    Now let’s look at the most obvious pro, vaccines provide immunity to certain diseases by triggering a natural immune response without posing as serious a threat as actually being infected(“FAQ:What is a vaccine and how does it work?”. Public Health Agency of Canada. N.P. N.D. Web. March 18 2015).

there’s not much else to say about this pro, so I’ll leave it at that.


    

    

    Regarding the previously mentioned “herd immunity” it refers to the concept that if fewer people can be infected(the more people are immune) the harder it is for a disease to spread and that above a certain point depending on the disease it becomes virtually impossible to spread through a population (“Community Immunity (Herd Immunity)”. Vaccines.gov. N.P. N.D. Web. March 18 2015)  the percentage of a population that must be immune to maintain herd immunity or herd immunity threshold) depends on the disease, but as long as the quotient is met the disease will not spread to MOST of the unvaccinated people within a largely immune population.





    Our final pro is that diseases could potentially be wiped out at least in part thanks to vaccines, until recent outbreaks measles was considered non existent in North America (“frequently asked questions about measles in the united states”. CDC. N.P. N.D. Web. March 18 2015) and Europe, proving the potential of vaccines to extinct the few species whose extinction would actually be beneficial to all life on earth. Smallpox (with the exception of 2 lab samples) owes it’s extinction almost exclusively to vaccines as even after extinction, there is still no proven cure (Williams, Gareth. “Lets finally condemn the smallpox virus to extinction”. NewScientist. NewScientist. 19 May 2014.Web. 15 March 2015).




    As for personal reasons an INDIVIDUAL wouldn’t WANT to get vaccinated, there are very few major religious sects other than the Dutch reformed Church that have anti-vaccine doctrines, however smaller religious groups could be opposed (theoriginalskepticalraptor, “What religions actually say about vaccines”.  Skeptical Raptor’s blog. N.P., January 7th 2014. Web. 14 March 2015), so naturally someone belonging to such a group would not vaccinate. otherwise some people could simply be afraid of the needle.




    So in conclusion I would say that the pros vastly outweigh the cons, and that vaccine refusal is based on solid grounds and are as such NOT justified in their actions.




*never procrastinating again, finished 10:52PM day before due can’t tell up and down*
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4楼  发表于: 2015-03-24  
问好冲之兄,什么时候能看到开文和丽丽的中文作文,哈哈!
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5楼  发表于: 2015-03-25  
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兄弟好!他们的中文作文,只怕海枯石烂也等不到也。
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噢?冲之兄不是在教他们学中文吗?
虽未谋面,但从兄的文字中,感觉丽丽很有中国东方美人胚子的气质,即类似于红楼梦里晴雯那种气质啊,似乎可以对她的教育契入一些中国元素。应该对她很有好处。
兄弟愚见,冲之兄一笑哈。
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7楼  发表于: 2015-03-26  
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兄弟高明!说她象晴雯,细细想,真有点。
我教这点中文不管多少用,只盼他们以后到中国去可以自己认路搭车就不错了。何尝不希望他们精通中文,可惜他们无心我也懒。
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8楼  发表于: 2015-03-30  
丽丽的画

  
  
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9楼  发表于: 2015-04-01  
好画,好文!
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10楼  发表于: 2016-05-03  
丽丽写给学校的信
hello, this is lily chen from your school,————————————. i tried calling you guys but the network was busy.
i wanted to notify you about a dead bat at the right side of the school. it is near the intermediates exit. it appears
not to have a head and a seemingly large whole in the chest. it is stained a bit with dried blood and seems to be a small brown bat.
i just wanted to let you know it would be safest if you contact animal control as the bat may contain varied fatal desieses.
small children may poke and praud at it, so i advise you call the animal control department to get it tested.
i sent you a text with all the information and even pictures i took. those are the pictures i took when i rode my bike to
the school around 4:50 PM.
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