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丽丽的“恐怖小说” : THE MASK

        There was once a little girl named rosy, she loved to dress up and show her mother. On one perticular day, rosy was going to school with her friend izabella and when the girls went into the classroom every one was there, like any tipical day. At snack, she spotted a narrow mask covered in yellow glitter, and sprayed perfectly with black, and a long tube like nose piont, rosy told izabella and said "Look at that shiny mask over there!" " Uh, rosy there is no mask there, sorry to say" said izabella. "Uh, ya huh! Look!" Rosy grabbed the mask from the dark shade and gave it to izabella to hold. "Wow, gee sorry, i thought there was no mask in the dark shade!""Its okay!" rosy cheerfully said as she felt proud of knowing it was there. "Hey, rosy...." "Ya?" said rosy, "How did u see the mask without light...?" Rosy thought aboutthat for a minute. " i dunno.... Maybe i might have super powers! rosy joked. "well... what if its something... ELSE?" Izabella shivered. Ah, will get over it, tomorrow will be a normal morning! cheerfully said izabella. "Uh, ya... normal day huh..." The young girls woke up and went to school to find no one was there, "Thats strange, i thought you said it would be a normal day...!" said rosy getting gassy. "Well, you know me.. ALWAYS LIEING! eh ha ha ha... he....?" "are you okay izabella...?" said rosy. "YUP, I FINE, I MEAN GOOD, I MEAN.. MAYBE, OR NOT, OR YES... or... maybe fi-" "Okay okay i get it!" said rosy rapeating it over and over again. They walked into the classroom to find blood splatered on the walls and floors. the girls screamed. "WHAT IN THE HELL OF HELLS HAPPENED TO OUR CLASSROOM!?!?!?!?" they shouted. The mask was suddenly hung on the walls with blood splatterd with  its rusted black paint, and only few parts of the yellow glitter on it. The mask also had a stick to hold like a haloween costume. "wu- wu- what happened to... the mask...?" said rosy. " i... dont know..." said izabella. they turned around to find the mask was not on the walls anymore, rosy looked down and saw the mask in her hands, the top of the mask had a sharp SHARp SHARP blade on it and cut into a featherlike shape, and each point of the blaid was sharp as a devils horn dipped in lava, the blaid and the handle stick was not there at the first place eather. Rosy suddenly felt the noise in her head saying "KILL HER......""NO I AM NOT GONNA KILL HER!" rosy shouted in the dead like classroom. "Ar- are you okay rosy...?" Rosy narrowed her eyes at izabelle and said, "I am PERFECTLY FINE."She made a laugh that almost no one could hear. hahahaha HA, with a sudden stroke, she hit izabella and said," I thought it would be a normal day...!" "i- i- im- im sorry..." "Its to LATE to be SORRY" and with one last hit, izabella was dead. Rosy head to the classroom and saw the princibal talking on the phone and heard him saying" itwas really there, i saw it kill everybody!" "Sir, it is against the law to call 911 for a bad reason" said the police moderator. Rosy walked slowly without making a sound to the princibal's office and said every so slowly "Found you...." and Cut the princibals head off. In five minutes the police arrived and saw rosy sharpening the feather like blade and looked up. "PUT YOUR HANDS UP!" Yelled the police. "Not in a million years" grinned rosy, she dissapeard and the polices turned around and with a second, they died,With the quick cut of the blade.    

                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                            
                                                                                                                         By: Lily Chen.
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1楼  发表于: 2014-09-28  
她又写了一个:“AWOKE"
    A pree-teen girl named Sky was walking down a stone path road with her family, she was wearing a flower top that was Blue with a little skirt at the bottom, and a blue frilly skirt that matched her other top, she was walking when she saw some scribbles carved into the stone paved road, she had thought it was a little kid scribbling on the path, so it was a normal thought. The family was walking down a steep slope when she found a rock with more scribbles on it and a letter "A" She said it was just in her head and it would be gone soon. Sky had long nails and she could pick through any lock in doors. The family was walking when sky saw more scribbles with more Signs Like: "-", "W" And "O" Sky was Getting scared and told her mother, she said that it maybe was supposed to be a puzzle and maybe a summer camp visited here for the puzzle. Sky was getting suspicious and Walked alittle faster then usual. She sat on a bench and saw even more scribbles with a.... word on it. It looked like a name Like "Ken" Sky put together all the words and she found out it said: A-Woken. Sky felt this pain in her body and she fell to the pathway, and ciclists running over her by accident because it was a slope. Sky got up and she found blood all over her mouth and bike stamps all over her. "Ahh! what happened to me?!?!?!" "Honey, Its okay your gonna be fine!" "I feel Terrible!" Said sky while Choking up lots of blood. She heard a noise in her head say.... "Wake Up! You know you wanna do the... Killing i guess...?" Because of Skys long nails they had been sharper as sharp as a japanese blade dipped in lava. Sky rushed to the house, grabbed her school bag, and ran out. She had killed and sufficated many people and kids, and was never seen again by parents, however, the parents had a new baby, and the minute they got the baby from the hospital and went to bed, the baby was stabbed at her neck by... Sky. The park was closed and forever abandon.
                                                                          
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手工作业:北冰洋的生态

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3楼  发表于: 2015-03-24  
开文的作文
难得看到开文写了一篇千字以上的文章,内容是关于防疫的,一些医学名词我也不太清楚,全文照搬,贴在这儿做个存档:


Vaccines ISP essay
Since the 18th century vaccines have been saving lives. Saving lives that would have ended horribly to the likes of whooping cough, measles, tuberculosis, even putting an end to smallpox’s reign of terror. For 300 years vaccines have made life better for mankind. but recently vaccination rates have gone down, that is to say, people aren’t vaccinating themselves or their children as often as we used to. I intend to weigh the pros and cons to receiving vaccinations against each other in order to evaluate whether or not the vaccine decliners are justified in their actions as well as looking at “pseudo cons” or personal reasons someone may not WANT to vaccinate.



First off, just to get this out of the way, the notion that vaccines cause autism originates from a study done on the 28th of February 1998 by Andrew Wakefield titled “Ileal-lymphoid-nodular hyperplasia, non-specific colitis, and pervasive developmental disorder in children”, which has been retracted in 2004 for scientific misconduct (Eggertson, Laura. “Lancet retracts 12-year-old article linking autism to MMR vaccines”. CMAJ. February 8, 2010. Web.  March 18 2015) as well as books written by physician William sears, otherwise known simply as “Dr.Sears” whose integrity is questionable at best (Snyder, John. “Cashing in on fear:The Danger of Dr.Sears”. Science Based Medicine. July 30th 2009. Web.  March 18 2015) Considering that the Wakefield paper being retracted and Dr.Sears’ questionable integrity demonstrated by this quote :

“[Measles is]Usually not [Dangerous]. Most cases, especially in children, pass within a week or so without any trouble. However, approximately 1 in 1000 cases is fatal…Now that measles is rare, many years go by without any fatalities.The possible complications of measles, mumps, or rubella are very similar to the side effect of the vaccines themselves.” - William Sears


the vaccines cause autism argument is almost certainly false. Though even if it was indeed true autism is a much better condition to live with than measles or whooping cough.



    A more valid concern regarding vaccines is compromised immune systems, while vaccines can support a weakened immune system in some cases, vaccines that use live viruses such as the MMR vaccine can pose a serious risk to an immunocompromised person’s health (riversideonline.com.”Vaccines When Your Immune System is Compromised”. N.D.Web. March 18 2015) this leaves immunocompromised individuals vulnerable to diseases such as measles mumps and rubella. There are other ways for these people to avoid infection, such as maintaining proper hygiene, or ensuring that people close to them are vaccinated, maintaining herd immunity which I will be covering later.

    On a similar note to the “autism” argument many anti-vaccine groups claim that vaccines weaken the immune system by being injected directly to the bloodstream rather than entering the way an infection would normally as well as containing harmful chemicals (“Your Immune System: How it works And How Vaccines Damage it”. Vaccine Risk Awareness. N.D. Web.  March 18 2015). Though a vaccine does enter the body differently than a the disease would naturally, there is no reason to that such a method would weaken the immune system, considering that memory cells are only created after a disease has bypassed the immune system’s first line of defense (skin, macrophages, ext.). as for the harmful chemicals, most point toward thermasol (ethylmercury) whose effects are often confused with methylmercury which is harmful in certain dosages though ethylmercury has no proven effects on the human body, despite this ethylmercury is no longer used in vaccines and shouldn’t be a concern.




    Now let’s look at the most obvious pro, vaccines provide immunity to certain diseases by triggering a natural immune response without posing as serious a threat as actually being infected(“FAQ:What is a vaccine and how does it work?”. Public Health Agency of Canada. N.P. N.D. Web. March 18 2015).

there’s not much else to say about this pro, so I’ll leave it at that.


    

    

    Regarding the previously mentioned “herd immunity” it refers to the concept that if fewer people can be infected(the more people are immune) the harder it is for a disease to spread and that above a certain point depending on the disease it becomes virtually impossible to spread through a population (“Community Immunity (Herd Immunity)”. Vaccines.gov. N.P. N.D. Web. March 18 2015)  the percentage of a population that must be immune to maintain herd immunity or herd immunity threshold) depends on the disease, but as long as the quotient is met the disease will not spread to MOST of the unvaccinated people within a largely immune population.





    Our final pro is that diseases could potentially be wiped out at least in part thanks to vaccines, until recent outbreaks measles was considered non existent in North America (“frequently asked questions about measles in the united states”. CDC. N.P. N.D. Web. March 18 2015) and Europe, proving the potential of vaccines to extinct the few species whose extinction would actually be beneficial to all life on earth. Smallpox (with the exception of 2 lab samples) owes it’s extinction almost exclusively to vaccines as even after extinction, there is still no proven cure (Williams, Gareth. “Lets finally condemn the smallpox virus to extinction”. NewScientist. NewScientist. 19 May 2014.Web. 15 March 2015).




    As for personal reasons an INDIVIDUAL wouldn’t WANT to get vaccinated, there are very few major religious sects other than the Dutch reformed Church that have anti-vaccine doctrines, however smaller religious groups could be opposed (theoriginalskepticalraptor, “What religions actually say about vaccines”.  Skeptical Raptor’s blog. N.P., January 7th 2014. Web. 14 March 2015), so naturally someone belonging to such a group would not vaccinate. otherwise some people could simply be afraid of the needle.




    So in conclusion I would say that the pros vastly outweigh the cons, and that vaccine refusal is based on solid grounds and are as such NOT justified in their actions.




*never procrastinating again, finished 10:52PM day before due can’t tell up and down*
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4楼  发表于: 2015-03-24  
问好冲之兄,什么时候能看到开文和丽丽的中文作文,哈哈!
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5楼  发表于: 2015-03-25  
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兄弟好!他们的中文作文,只怕海枯石烂也等不到也。
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噢?冲之兄不是在教他们学中文吗?
虽未谋面,但从兄的文字中,感觉丽丽很有中国东方美人胚子的气质,即类似于红楼梦里晴雯那种气质啊,似乎可以对她的教育契入一些中国元素。应该对她很有好处。
兄弟愚见,冲之兄一笑哈。
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兄弟高明!说她象晴雯,细细想,真有点。
我教这点中文不管多少用,只盼他们以后到中国去可以自己认路搭车就不错了。何尝不希望他们精通中文,可惜他们无心我也懒。
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8楼  发表于: 2015-03-30  
丽丽的画

  
  
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9楼  发表于: 2015-04-01  
好画,好文!
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丽丽写给学校的信
hello, this is lily chen from your school,————————————. i tried calling you guys but the network was busy.
i wanted to notify you about a dead bat at the right side of the school. it is near the intermediates exit. it appears
not to have a head and a seemingly large whole in the chest. it is stained a bit with dried blood and seems to be a small brown bat.
i just wanted to let you know it would be safest if you contact animal control as the bat may contain varied fatal desieses.
small children may poke and praud at it, so i advise you call the animal control department to get it tested.
i sent you a text with all the information and even pictures i took. those are the pictures i took when i rode my bike to
the school around 4:50 PM.
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Re:丽丽的“恐怖小说” : Testing the waters
Testing the waters - Lily Chen
The bell goes off. The 2000 students that made the decision to not ditch Greylinde high school today grumpily head to class, half awake. Even though the school was nicely placed close to the Gulf of Mexico, the beautiful waters didn’t stop the school from looking horrid. Clementine begrudgingly stomps out of the office. She has just gotten into trouble for getting into a fight with another student before school had even started.
Wow, you look really good today!” someone yells from the crowds of people.
“Oh, well i try my best!” Clementine smiles. She makes her way down to english, and as she strides down the halls, she remembers she has an english assignment that’s worth 15% on the report cards. How terrific.
Clementine enters the dilapidated classroom. She climbs into her seat and pulls out her needed tools to get good grades and make good money.
“So, who’s ready to fail a lot?” Wednesday says, chuckling.
“Oh please-” Clementine begins. “-We both know well enough that i’m going to get the highest mark in this class, silly goose” she says snarkily. As they laugh together, a student unaware of Clementine’s queen status in the school accidentally knocks down her collection of pencils and other assortments of school supplies. Clementine stops.
“You”.
“yea, what?” the student asks.
“Pick my pencils up, now!” Clementine screams. The student drops to their knees to pick it up.
“Much better! Now, once your done please place them back on my desk” she explains. Just as the student finishes his task, the tired english teacher opens the door.
“Alright guys, you know what’s up. Big assignment and all that, right? 15% of your midterm report cards! Open up to page 149, quote 3. Get to work and no cheating!” the teacher shouts. Clementine decides not to bother this already bothered teacher today. She opens up her textbook to page 149, quote 3. She tests the water, only to decide to drown. As she studies the quote, she feels a lump under the page. She turns the page to investigate. As she looks, she finds a small ring. Clementine picks it up and wonders how it got there. She wasn’t exactly fond of rings, they were always so useless to her. She also hasn’t given her textbooks to anyone, so how did it get there? As she eyes the foreign figure, she becomes enamoured by the beauty and detailed design of the ring.
What beautiful curves and intricate patterns it has! What lush and smooth gems have been bestowed on them! Her mind sings. She slowly turns the ring around to the back. She is introduced to the word
“Ceto”. Clementine closes the book and puts the ring on. It looks stunning on her.  
“Wow” Clementine gasps. She breaks out of this enchantment and decides to work on the actual assignment before any more time has been wasted.
Come lunchtime, Clementine was ready to wear the ring loud and proud. She strut her way down to the lunch cafeteria to meet up at her usual eating spot. Her legs let loose and she plops down happily with her tray of food.
“You guys are not going to believe me, but check out this ring i found in my textbook that looks absolutely fantastic on me!” Clementine excitingly shrieks.
“Oh wow, it looks like its worth billions or something!” April beams as she joins with her tray.
“I used to dislike rings, but i could really get used to this!” Clementine begins. “Isn’t it just simply crazy i get a nice and elegant ring in such a garbage highschool?” Clementine jokes. Her friends laugh in unison and clementine lets out a few chuckles. They eat their food and talk. The rest of the day goes on pretty normally. Well, at least for Clementine. If being pestered by compliments and having to say “thank you so much” every second or so is your normal.
Clementine gets home in her car and phones April and Wednesday on a three way call. She continues her rant about boys on the call.
“So anyways, what’s up with jet? Like he literally smells li-” Clementine is interrupted by a large banging sound. “What was that?” Clementine asks, irritated.
“I’m not sure, but i think i heard what you heard! Like a huge whoosh or something!” Wednesday says confused.
“Hmm.. probably just some harsh winds. It was pretty frigid today! Well, i’ve gotta get to my english, i’ll die of old age if i don't get it done in a snap!” Clementine wishes them their goodbyes. She climbs onto her soft and squishy bed and pulls up her heavy bag up with her. “Alright good grades, come to mama!” Clementine says encouragingly. She opens up to page 149. “And now the working begins” Clementine whispers. She tears her notebook open and begins to take notes. Being so concentrated doesn’t happen too often for Clementine, but when she was working she had barely even noticed her ring had given off a slight but radiant glow. When she did realize it, she nearly jumped out of her blanket. She slowly sits back up straight to look at her hand. The ring was giving off a beautiful but mysterious blue light, and there wasn’t any place for a battery. She looks down to her textbooks to let her eyes rest, only to see that quote 3 has now illuminated too! She kicks the textbook onto the ground with a loud slamming sound out of pure shock and rattles the ring off of her shaking hands. “W-what the hell just happened?” She cried. She slowly inches her way towards the ring to have a cautious look. Still glowing, it seems. Her fear, however instantly turns into opportunity. “Hmm, what if i can make this make me even more popular?” Clementine wonders.
The next day rolls on, and Clementine eagerly shows off the now seemingly glowing ring off to everyone.
“Isn’t it just simply divine?” Clementine shudders in excitement. She admires her ring once more, as she heads to English. Clementine takes her seat once she arrives and opens up her textbook.
“Okay class, continue on your assignments, you have the whole period” he says as he heads to his desk. Clementine flips to 149, and almost cries out loud when she sees that the quote is still glowing! She catches herself and stops from screaming in the unusually quiet classroom. She takes a final glance to reassure herself that what she is seeing isn't just tricks being played by her eyes. Still glowing that lovely and beautiful blue. Before Clementine can realize what’s happening, a large bang disturbed the class.
“What was that?” Someone from the class asks. Murmuring begins when everyone is interrupted by another ear-rattling bang. Everyone stops in silence for a few long seconds when the windows suddenly crash and cave into the school, with water filling the gaps. The entire school shakes and the water is pouring in like a bubble bath gone terrible. The students scramble to get to the door and run before the room is flooded with gross ocean water. What bad fortune Clementine decided to live in Tampa florida 5 years ago. The room practically fills up in a matter of seconds, and Clementine barely slips through the door and shuts it closed. She lets out an exasperated sigh and continues running. She catches up to Wednesday.
“What the hell? What just happened?” Clementine pants.
“It’s a flood or something!” she replies. They run together, footsteps in unison as they reach the main lobby. Clementine’s hands are shaking, and she can barely breath by this point. Clementine takes a look at her hands to see that the ring is glowing much more than before.
What do i do? This ring has to have something to do with all of this! Clementine gasps for breath as she desperately tries to catch it. Just as she regains it, a large body of water crashes into the left side of the lobby, narrowly missing Clementine as she falls to the grown in panic. The rooms starts to flood with water.
Out, out! I need to get out! Was all Clementine could think of. She entered the office in the lobby. She new there was a back door there that she could use to get out. She runs through the maze-like room, water inching up her back and freezing up her mind as reaches the back of the office. Clementine holds the only breath she has as the freezing ice water swallows her. She twists the doorknob. Twist, twist. She tries a few more times.
Oh my god, dont tell me its locked! With all her might, she twists one more time. The water flushes out of the door and takes Clementine with them. Clementine chokes out some water that got into her mouth and exhales deeply. She takes a look at her surroundings.
Crushed bricks, overturn trees and gross muddy bedrock welcomes her to what she thought was already bad enough.
A high school with no grass and bland colors has just become something even worse. All Clementine could really do was let out a weird “oh” sound. She looks to her right to see water rushing towards her, eager to come play. Clementine pops up and is ready to run, when she hears a faint noise from the distance. She lets the water wash over her as she listens attentively.
“I want my ring back, i want it now! Where is it, where is it?” She hears someone scream.
What ring? Clementine thinks. She looks again and sees a woman with a long, flowing gold and red robe, along with a solid gold ribbon placed onto her head. She seemed to be untouched by the water.
“Where is my ring? I want it, i need it!” She screams once more. The woman notices Clementine and starts to walk towards her. As she raises her hand, a huge crown of water rises from the sea and follows her.
W-what? This chick can’t control water, can she?
“You there, have you seen my ring? My darling Phorcys gave it to me!” The woman says, distraught.
“Uh, what does the ring look like?” Clementine asks. She looks down to her hand and hides it.
Is this woman’s name Ceto? She thinks.
“Its small, has jewels on it-” she starts and then stops to recollect. ”-oh, and it glows blue!” the woman says. Clementine puts her hands behind her back and takes off the ring as quick as lightning.
“I-is this your ring?” Clementine shudders.
“Oh my god, you found it! Thank you thank you thank you! How shall i repay you? You have done me 1000 wishes!” The woman jumps.
“Is your name Ceto?” Clementine first asks.
“Yes!” Ceto replies.
“Well, Ceto, if you could undo this entire mess that would do me bundles of joy” Clementine says truthfully.
“Oh yea, I can do that for you” Ceto says, still joyful.
“Thank you so much my dear, i shall return to the sea.” She finishes, as she bows and walks away. Clementine watches as Ceto reaches the distance. She raises her hands, and a huge wave follows her hands.
“Hold your breath, it will only be a few moments!” Ceto yells from afar. Clementine silently follows, plugging her nose with her hands
and puffing up her cheeks with air. Ceto throws her arms to the right of her and water rains down from the sky. Clementine lets the water engulf her.
A few short moments pass, and the water slowly returns back into the sea. Clementine looks around. It’s like nothing has happened! Everything was repared in a matter of seconds, it seems! Clementine stands up slowly, drowsed with water. She takes a step. 2, 3, and soon she is running.
I need to find my friends! Clementine circles around the school. She eventually finds her friends, huddling under a tree.
“Guys! I’m so glad i found you!” Clementine exclaims happily.
“Oh my god, we found you! Thank god!” They reply. They gather themselves and decide to go to Clementine’s house. They all take a shower and wash off. They make themselves comfey on Clementines soft bed.
“Where did all the damage go? I thought it was a huge flood!” Wednesday asks, confused.
“Oh, uh, i think it sort of washed itself away if that makes any sense?” Clementine blurted. This wasn’t one of her best lies.
“Yea, maybe” April doubts. “Where did your ring go, by the way?” she finishes.
“Oh, i think i lost it in the flood!” Clementine whimpers a fake whimper. Wednesday and April talk more about what has just happened, and they notice Clementine fell fast fast asleep during their conversation.
“Lets leave her to it” they say. They tenderly got off the bed as to make no noise, and gently close the door.
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